Improper request:
(shop name)
(full address)
(telephone number)
Proper request:
Hey Phil this is (insert name here) from (insert shop name here).
We have a brick and mortar shop and would very much like to be included in your online list. If you could add us it would be very much appreciated. Thanks Phil!(Optional) By the way, we love what you do, think you’re terrific, and very good looking.
(shop name)
(full address)
(telephone number)
I mean come on! Jeez!!